Thursday, September 06, 2007

This Floating World . . .






brooklyn autumn--
the station wagon's
license plate: ukiyo e
walking past
in my haiku hat



a man sitting alone
at a greenwich village cafe
reading
the obituaries
autumn chill






© Judy Kamilhor 2007

7 Comments:

Anonymous SuzyR said...

Your poems conjure up such wonderful visual images. Great job!

8:05 PM  
Blogger WorkingWords100 said...

Thanks for being a member of the Autumn Haiku 2007. I am looking forward to your postings about Fall in NYC!

9:45 PM  
Blogger Judy Kamilhor said...

Thanks Suzy and Isabel!

kami

11:35 AM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

These are excellent, the use of autumn chill is particularly effective.

4:05 AM  
Blogger Judy Kamilhor said...

Thanks Crafty!


kami

11:21 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Contrasting moods, both nicely caught.

1:15 PM  
Blogger Judy Kamilhor said...

Thanks Bill.


kami

9:11 AM  

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