Two Oldies But Goodies
thanksgiving
lead me not
into Penn Station
(a new take on the old story of a kid misunderstanding the Lord's Prayer....)
holiday
the moon and I
almost full
[thanks, Bill, for the suggested reworking!]
© Judy Kamilhor 2007
lead me not
into Penn Station
(a new take on the old story of a kid misunderstanding the Lord's Prayer....)
holiday
the moon and I
almost full
[thanks, Bill, for the suggested reworking!]
© Judy Kamilhor 2007
posted by kami haiku at
11:25 AM
4 Comments:
nice couple judy
john
I like these. If you don't mind, I'm tempted to flip the second one
holiday
the moon and I
almost full
where "full" and "holiday" combine to make "bingeing" unnecessary. But ignore this if it gets in your way.
Just wonderful, as usual! Sorry for commenting late, but I've been resisting Google's forcing account signups just to post comments.
Thanks John, Bill, and Suzy!
kami
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