More Off Beat Poems from Suzy
Suzy says:
off-his-rocker
the homeless man
hopes for love
off-beat
the drummer
starts over
off-and-on
the lovers
quarrel
[............put in an apostrophe and the meaning changes somewhat:]
off-and-on
the lovers'
quarrel
off-duty
the officer
is still on duty
kami says:
Anyone else out there want to give these a try?
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© Suzy Raymer 2009
off-his-rocker
the homeless man
hopes for love
off-beat
the drummer
starts over
off-and-on
the lovers
quarrel
[............put in an apostrophe and the meaning changes somewhat:]
off-and-on
the lovers'
quarrel
off-duty
the officer
is still on duty
kami says:
Anyone else out there want to give these a try?
--------------------
© Suzy Raymer 2009
posted by kami haiku at
3:52 PM
13 Comments:
offline
talking
to myself
(BTW, shift that comma one space to the left, and you have still another meaning.)
Thanks, Bill. I like it a lot.
kami
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off my head
i fall
off the wagon
off switch
turned
on
off-hand
the thief
returns value
offside
the player
plays on
off-key
hit
the right note
offence
aint
defence
off-white
more like
magnolia
offspring
do not
relate
offer
me
advice
Thanks, Ben! I appreciate your contributions.
kami
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